B. Because it's a way to draw the reader into a story through imagery, before exploring the legal/technical details.
Adjective-laden writing is the mark of an amateur. However, in the passage you're objecting to, there doesn't seem to be a single adjective in there.
B. Because it's a way to draw the reader into a story through imagery, before exploring the legal/technical details.
Adjective-laden writing is the mark of an amateur. However, in the passage you're objecting to, there doesn't seem to be a single adjective in there.