From a rhetorical perspective, it's an extended "Yes-set" argument or persuasion sandwich. You see it a lot with cult leaders, motivational speakers, or political pundits. The problem is that you have an unpopular idea that isn't very well supported. How do you smuggle it past your audience? You use a structure like this:
* Verifiable Fact
* Obvious Truth
* Widely Held Opinion
* Your Nonsense Here
* Tautological Platitude
This gets your audience nodding along in "Yes" mode and makes you seem credible so they tend to give you the benefit of the doubt when they hit something they aren't so sure about. Then, before they have time to really process their objection, you move onto and finish with something they can't help but agree with.
The stuff on the history of computation and cybernetics is well researched with a flashy presentation, but it's not original nor, as you pointed out, does it form a single coherent thesis. Mixing in all the biology and movie stuff just dilutes it further. It's just a grab bag of interesting things added to build credibility. Which is a shame, because it's exactly the kind of stuff that's relevant to my interests[3][4].
> "Your manuscript is both good and original; but the part that is good is not original, and the part that is original is not good." - Samuel Johnson
The author clearly has an Opinion™ about AI, but instead of supporting they're trying to smuggle it through in a sandwich, which I think is why you have that intuitive allergic reaction to it.
* Verifiable Fact
* Obvious Truth
* Widely Held Opinion
* Your Nonsense Here
* Tautological Platitude
This gets your audience nodding along in "Yes" mode and makes you seem credible so they tend to give you the benefit of the doubt when they hit something they aren't so sure about. Then, before they have time to really process their objection, you move onto and finish with something they can't help but agree with.
The stuff on the history of computation and cybernetics is well researched with a flashy presentation, but it's not original nor, as you pointed out, does it form a single coherent thesis. Mixing in all the biology and movie stuff just dilutes it further. It's just a grab bag of interesting things added to build credibility. Which is a shame, because it's exactly the kind of stuff that's relevant to my interests[3][4].
> "Your manuscript is both good and original; but the part that is good is not original, and the part that is original is not good." - Samuel Johnson
The author clearly has an Opinion™ about AI, but instead of supporting they're trying to smuggle it through in a sandwich, which I think is why you have that intuitive allergic reaction to it.
[1]: https://changingminds.org/disciplines/sales/closing/yes-set_...
[2]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Compliment_sandwich
[3]: https://www.oranlooney.com/post/history-of-computing/
[4]: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=45220656#45221336