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		martinjacobd on Aug 27, 2023 \| parent \| context \| favorite \| on: Seven Sins of Writing I guess I just don't see sentences like this, even from novice writers.

readthenotes1 on Aug 28, 2023 [–]

I don't see sentences like this, even from novices.

For example:)

Btw, Stephen Brust has a series of books whose authorial tone is explicitly wordy, and he makes it work.

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