What this "NASA-style powerpoint" refers to is the fact that the content would be better presented as normal flowing text instead of set of slides that are overpacked with text.
On the other hand this presentation is not that bad, at least it does not have bullet lists nested five levels deep where text size does not match the nesting levels and such things.
On the other hand this presentation is not that bad, at least it does not have bullet lists nested five levels deep where text size does not match the nesting levels and such things.